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== Assignment 12: Dear future 7th graders, When I first came to WMS i thought this school was huge,that i was going to get lost and i wouldn't be able to find my classes. Eventually, i got used to the school and found my way around to my every class. As you may know this school is not as big as it seems. At the end it all you will know your whole way around the school. So this school is pretty much easy to find your classes. ==

== My school was pretty good here.All teachers are pretty much cool they won't call your parent if you do your work and behave. This school will be easy for you as long as you stay out of trouble. Your grades are based on majority of your homework so do it and turn it all in. To me this school is some what a good school.Mr.boll is a real cool teacher so he shouldn't really get on your nerves. ==

== Good job Chelsea- I think you are a very good writer and I hope you stay WMS next year. This is a good start to a letter. You could add a little. Maybe you could talk about some things that you wish you would have done differently in the year or things that you did that you were glad you did. Does this make sense? Is there anything that you would like to see at the school that you think kids could help to start? (Student council, yearbook, newspaper, etc) Just some thoughts. ==

==Assignment 11: My description of one of my rooms in my smart house. My dancing room has a floor shiney as the sun. It also has a spectacular sparkiling disco balls hanging from the roof. Another thing is we have huge steroes with banging surround systems. Finally, have a elevator that takes you up down to the dancing room and there is a snack bar in the dancing room.==

Assignment 10: Hello.! My name is Chelsea Martin my paragrahs are going to be about how Oprah Winfrey is an influential person.!
== Oprah Winfrey is a influntial and talented person. Oprah is the grestest black philanthropist in American history according to the economy. She also ranked the richiest African American history of the 20th century. In 1998 Oprah created a charity that supported charitable projects and provided grants to not making money organizations around the globe. Oprah Winfrey personally herself covered all administrative cost associated with the charity so that 100% of all the funds raised went to charity programs. == == Secondly, her show also raises money through promotion of her public charity. In 1976, Oprah moved to Baltimore where she hosted the TV chat show "People are talking".! That show made a hit 8 years later she was recruited by a Chicago TV to host her own morning show A.M. Chicago. As you may know Oprah may have been very excited to get a good promotion. Oprah Winfrey also played in the movie named "The color purple" by Steven Speilbergs. == == Oprah is also a dedicated activist for children's rights. Oprah Winfrey was born January 29,1954. Also, her influence has been the greatest through her talk show. At the age of 17 Oprah won the Miss Black Tennesse beauty pageant. Another thing is Oprah is called "arguably the world's most powerful woman". ==

These are my informational details and paragraphs based on how Oprah WInfrey is an influential person.
== Great job Chelsea- you are a good writer. I like the informational style of your writing. Good job at avoiding opinions. Of course, you could certainly add more about her television show and the effect that the show has had on so many people. This may take some more reading, but you are doing a really good job. Keep working hard on this. == == Assignment 9: The most influential person to me is Oprah Winfrey. She has her own host show,actress,and a philanthropist.. Also, she has made a contributions to her community and other people by getting them new houses built and other things. Finally, she is the most influential person because she is was once thw world's only black billionaire and she is the greatest black philanthropist in the American history. == == Good job with this Chelsea. You are a really good writer and you show it in this format. I would like to work to get you into a scholars class next year. I can't promise anything. Would you be interested in that? Keep working hard. Yes if i come here next year. == == ﻿Assignment 8: It's was a rainy day. Me and my 5 cousins were in my Aunt's house. We were trying to find something fun to do. So being as though it was the weekend and we were stuck in a huge house, we decided to play school. My big cousin Carlos was the pricipal,my cousin Jasmine was the teacher, My cousin Carmen was the gym teacher, my cousin Jai was the activites teacher, and me and my little cousin deonte (the youngest) was the students. == == As you know the usual we started playing school. Then it started getting boring. So my Aunt (my cousins mom) called us down for dinner. So while were at the table eating dinner we were talking about what we were going to play when we get done eating. Later, on after we got done eating are good food and everything we all were sitting in my 2 girl cousins Carmen and Jasmine room talking about what we were going to do because, we still didn't firgure out something fun to do. == == Next, We finally figured out what we were going to do. Well it wasn't necessarily us my big cousin Carlos the oldest of us all (the instigator as always) made the plan about us doing something extremly bad. So first thing first we had to do was hide all the belts. Then we did it we all broke a thing that was really important (or some what important) to my aunt. So we all were thinking well we did it but we can't get whooped because there is not a belt we could get beat with because, we hide them all ( or so we thought we were saved). == == Later, 2 hours later my aunt came up stairs to get something out of her room and she seen the broken stuff (her red face proved she was furious).That's when she went back down stairs to think about how the things in her room may have got broken. Then she figured it out some how that we had broke the things. She figured that because, she heard something fall hard and loudly but, she just thought that it was us playing with our toys or us still playing school. So she called us down stairs andc we knew we were in trouble.! == == We all thought we were okay that we weren't going to get whooped (we were wrong again). We obviously we didn't think our plan all the through because everything went backwards. Well as always the youngest one had 2 snitch. My cousin Deonte the 5 year old snitched. He told my aunt (his mom) our whole plan and what we did and broke but, of course she already new what we broke already. So we all had to pull our pants down and behind over in a line on the heater. I think you could add just a little here about how you were feeling. I am sure you were feeling scared. Did you feel bad at all about breaking the stuff? == == Finally, my aunt told my little cousin the 5 year old (snitch) to get a belt. So of course once again we didnt think he was going to go get the belt. Then again we thought wrong. As he dashed up the stairs to get the belt we were hoping he wouldn't grab one. Not only dis he grebed a belt he grabed a leather black belt. Which is the last belt that we would ever want to get whooped with and he gave it to her. == == Awwwwwwww.!!!!!! is what we screamed and cried but, as you know we had learned are lesson. To never trust my little cousin again and to make sure we think out the plan throughly. Well of course that's not the lesson we learned, we learned that we should never do that again. ==

Chelsea, you are doing a really good job here so far. You could add some description of the people, ages, and stuff like that. Good intro, good story. Keep writing, you are doing a good job here. == Assignment 7: HUHHH.!!! (this is so hard) which one should I.???? This is crazy I don't know what i should do. HMMM......should i go clothes and shoes shopping or get a phone. Well i guess I'm going to have to make a wise decision. Which one is more important. I guess Which ever one is more important to me is the one i am going to go with.!!! == == Assignment 6: One day a man named Jawabi was walking down the street in the dark. He worked for a assainator who was killing peoples families and they wanted him dead but, the only way they could kill em is if they found out where he is at. So one day they found out that Jawabi was working for the man and cleaning up his dirty work. == == Jawabi is a man that was poor. Then one day it all changed when a man which is the assainator told him that if he worked for him and helped him with his job that he would make sure he would would be okay and safe for the rest of his life. So of course Jawabi like any other poor person would have took the job so he did. Then the man took Jawabi in and made sure he ate and got clean.The next day Jawabi felt that he was protected. ==

Then again Jawabi's life changed but, this time it didn't get better it got worst. The people found out he worked for the man and they wanted revenge so they made a plan.
== Assignment 5: I think they should be able to fix the resturants or buildings. I think it's horrible that the furniture store,shoe store and a resturant got fire damage in Squirrel Hil. There was heavy damage to Levins I hope they could fix the stores because a lot of people may depend on them. I also, wonder what happened hopefully the stores get rebuilt. Finally, I think they should tear the damages down and fix them so people could go back to shopping at their favorite stores. ==

Assignment 4:
== Here is my opinion about weither the Principal should or shouldn't require a policy that students should wear uniforms. My opinion about it is that we should not wear uniforms. Do you really think that we should wear uniforms? == == First, I thought about the good and the bad about kids wearing uniforms but, to me it's not going to make an change about certain students getting teased or not. I think that because weither they have on uniforms or not people are still going to talk about them and their shoes and other things like that. Also, i think that it's just going to be the same as people having no uniforms on. == == Secondly, I think the only way uniforms would change how people treat each other is if we had to wear at the beginning of the year. I also think that it would be better if when the school first opened that they had started to force the policy of students having to wear uniforms. I think that because, when u start making students wear uniforms and they know that the year before they didn't have to wear them. Then students start complaining about the uniforms and why it's so stupid that they have to wear them. People will also complain about the uniforms because, they don't like the colors of them. == == Third, I think that if you make people wear uniforms they won't be able to express there still or how they like to dress. Also, I don't like the fact about the policy of us having to wear uniforms because, that's when all these other policies well start. For example, they start telling us that we can't wear jewlery,belts, certain color shoes, andother things like that. I also, think that we shouldn't wear uniforms because we only will get one dress down day and evenon that day we still might have to wear part of the uniform for that day. == == These are the details of why i think we shouldn't have to wear uniforms and why i think the Principal shouldn't inforce the policy of students having to wear uniforms. Here is my opinion hope you enjoyed.! ==

Chelsea, YOu have a good paper here. Your reasons are clear and your writing is pretty good. A proofread might help fix a few of the mistakes. You could also use a strong thesis statement in the first paragraph. "i don't think uniforms are a good idea becuase" and then say your three main ideas that you explain in the paragraphs. THis will help the reader keep your thoughts organized.

Good work. Keep it up. == Assignment 3: I'm going to tell you How to make a pizza. First, you preheat your oven to 250. Second, you get the dough out and make it into the the shape you want your pizza. Then, you you put your sauce on. After, that you put your cheese on and your pepperonies or whatever types of toppings you like on your pizza. While your doing all of that you want to make sure that there is enough room on the edges for your crust. Finally, you put your pizza in the oven. == ==Assignment 2: I live on montier st in wilkinsburg. There is a lot of brick buildings on my st. Also, there is about 5 different kinds of sets of dueplexes on my st. I live in a White painted house with yellow bricks. Another thing is that there is an store on my st with a sign that lights up that says open when the store is open.==

CHelsea- I think you are a really good writer. I'm not sure your description of your street is complete, but you have started well. I can actually picture the street and what it might look like. You could continue to talk about the street, the sidewalks, and maybe even the people that live on the street. Good work. Keep it up.

Assignment 1:
==I would choose Mindless Behavior to come to my school. I would pick them because, a lot of people in my school like them including a couple a students in my class. Also, i would pick them because, a lot of people think their cool. Another thing is i like their music well some of it ne ways. These are some of the details of why i would choose Mindless Behavior to come to my school.== fffff