11)+Brandon+Grayson

my most influential person is micheal jackson becouse he showed the world dat dancing can be easy to everyone that tries it and works at it >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi im Brandon Grayson and im gonna tell you about the time i lost my hat.2008 i was on my way to virginia by car and i rolled down my window to see the sights and the wind took my hat right off my head i tried to catch it and i missed then i said"Mom its gone" "whats gone" said my mom,"my hat" i said, well get out and get it said my mom so she stopped the car and i got out of the car to get my hat and wheni look for it it was gone i said "mom its gone" she said "boy you better look for dat got @@@@ hat"i felt like luaghing but i knew if i did she would smack my eyes balls out of their sockets so i just kept my mouth shut.Iwas lookin for a long time then i seen a deer run un a hill guess what i seen,MY HAT when i seen it i sprinted after the deer and tried to tackle it and missed and fell on my face(faceplant).After i fell i got up and gave it another go so i ran a little slower ad stopped by the deer then the deer looked at me and walked over to me and walked right past me without thinkin i leaped onto the deer and the deer went buckwild and tried to whip me off.I grabbed my hat and jumped off and fell down the hill and hit every branch and tree on the way down when i got to the bottom of the hill i looked up and seen that every one was stairin at me in total awll so i got up and got into the car and we drove to the hospital when we got there we checked in and i got put on a strecher or sometype of rolling thing and they rode me to my room when i got to my room and the nurse said "ill be back sweety" so i waited and waited and waited till the nurse came back then finally the nurse came and i was exited then my whole expression changed becouse she had a needle in her hand then she said"close your eyes sweety its not gonna hurt" so i was like oh peace of cake. Then when she stuck it in my skin i felt like i got hit by a plane and it only hit my one arm.So at the end i reallized it stopped hurting and i was exited.Then we left my room to get a excuess for school becuse i been in there for about a month.So we got my exscuess and we went into the car and we drove home on the way home we went to mcdonalds.i said "mom instead of goin in can we go in the drive thru" yeah ok she said so we went into the drive thru then i asked for a number 3 witch is a double quarter pounder then i said but with no onions becouse onions are yuck.then after mcdonalds we went home and i went into my room and went to sleep.And that was the time when i lost my hat. Ok Brandon, You have a good start here. I can almost picture you walking along the expressway looking for your hat. Now you should add some description about  looking for your had and what happened next. How did you feel? What were you thinking? Did you think it was funny? or were you scared? >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> assignment 7: wassup yo im brandon and im a black evil kinevil and im a good guy but cant fight and i have no friends cus im lame and the way i got this way is becouse im stoopid im slow i fought a rake and the rake won becouse first the rake waz talkin da hot stuff den i ran up to em and socked him then he stepped on my life and put his feet in my face. he might just be to cuttthrought to put ur feet in someones face but nah mean i aint kno what to do im stoopid so after he did that i layed there and started crying and picked up a dinosaur and threw it at him it crushed him and he ripped through it like he did my face. then he ooped me and socked me then tried to cut it so i chased him doen and pit him in a choke/sleeper hold and put him to sleep nd he never woke up .i learned that u shouldnt fighht a rake becouse ull lose haha becouse rakes got bangs and its hard to hit him hes too skinny. so u hit his head and hope for the best imean or shoot him but that type of violence is not the answer but everytime i do somethin stoopid i get into a fight wit something last time i faught sheep with down syndrome and got my glutes handed to me it sucked but i learned to think smart and not be stoopidly dumb. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ASSIGNMENT 3:For this assignment im gonna teach you how to connect a ps3 to a flat screen tv. Ok First, you get the color cords witch are Red,Yellow and White. The yellow cord is for vision so you could see the game your playing on the playstation 3. The red and yellow cords are for sound so you could hear the game.Then when you find the cords in the back or side of the tv there should be red white and yellow outlets to put the cords in then after that theres a plug on the other side of the cord i think its called a av cord and thats what your supposed to plug in to the ps3.Then you get the plug that goes into a extenstion cord you plug that in then put it in to the ps3 then press the red button on the ps3 then turn on your controller and your ready to go. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ASSIGNMENT 2: in wilkinsburg theres good people then theres bad people the bad people are the ones killing people and stealing from old wrinkly people the good people are the ones that risk their lives to help people for example police officers they help to keep the criminals in jail another example of good people are paramedics becouse even thoe they sometimes they still try their very bests and other things in wilkinsburg are the library thats were you can get movies and take out books to read and you can go to cvs save a lot or dollar general to get snacks and drinks Hey, im Brandon Grayson and a person that i think would be a help to Wilkinsburg School District is Martin Luther King becouse he is a good speaker and he would tell us a whole speech about school and knoledge and what its worth.Then he would say Wilkinsburg School District you need to get it together get on track dont grow up to be a slump on a pile of bags and rocks cus your better than that.Then we would get inspirated to do work but like everytime else someone else come well do it then stop then do some then stop then work then well get to the point were well conpletly stop working ut we need to stay on track and get that work done.Thats why i think Martin Luther king would be a help to WMS............

SIGHNING OUT, Brandon Grayson

Brandon- You can be a really good writer and a good student when you try. This is a nice paragraph. You did a good job of describing why the message of Dr. King would be inspirational to WMS students. You have showed me an ability here to argue a perspective in your writing with relevant details. Keep working hard. You can get started on your descriptive paragraph today