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Many people like computers. My favorite type is a portable one(laptops). I like laptops because they can go where ever. They do more things than computers. For example many laptops come with web cams. A computer you would have to go out and spend money on a cam. Both computers and laptops let you watch movies listen to music, download things and more. Its better on a laptop because all those things can be done portable.

Another example if your in college you need a paper done in a hour while your on the bus you can type it up. Or go to a coffee shop or (cafe) and talk to friends. Its also availible to take to A school and take notes. It can also be carried around to listen music. It also can travel unlike a computer. It can go on vacation with people.

There are many more advatages of laptops. For example computers speakers need to be bought, laptops on the other hand have build-in speakers. Another advantage of laptops are parts. Most parts of computers have to be bought. For example mouse's on a laptops you just slide, computers they would have to be bought. One more example of advantages is the buttons. Laptops have way more buttons then computers. These are my advantages and reasons why i think laptops are better than computers.

Laptops are really helpful. They help out in many ways. For example people who work far from home. Another example is here at WMS. Laptops help the school do more research. Laptops also help out here with teachers can use projectors with their class. They can do grades and emails and more.....but faster and portable.

These are a couple sentences that support my topic. This is why i beleive that laptops are better than computers.

﻿Assignment 5:

I think Ben Rothensburger should not get married. I believe he should not get many reasons. One reason is all is criminal charges, he has too many. I also believe that because he is a foot ball player. He will not have any time with his family if he had kids.

﻿Assignment 6: Hello my name is Kanru Gille. I am 17 years old, i live in Nigera. I have two brothers, and three sisters. I live in an old old house. I will tell you a story about the time i was almost beat to death. 

It was a couple years ago... I was going out with my two brothers to go to the market. All of a sudden a big helicopter came landing in back of us. We kept walking to the market. Then as soon as we were about to turn the corner we heard a megaphone say " PUT YOUR HANDS ON YOUR HEAD." We kept walking, they started to chase after us. I tried to tell them i didnt speak English. They put me in handcuffs and restrained my brothers and sisters (KACO, ERICKA AND FAETTE).

Paris- I like your start here. Good job with the intro and the description. Maybe you could add something that would be suspenseful for the reader. Like, I didn't know it was going to be one of the best reunions ever!

Assignment 8:" bzzzzzzzzzzz" the bee's buzzed. The grill started with the sound of a "click click". Everyone was arriving to the FAMILY PICNICK. It is a traditional thing that goes on every year. My name is Paris and i am 13 years old. All of my cousins are coming.

There is a huge park, a place to eat with picnick tables and a grass area. Its awesome and hystarical. We all gathered around and talked. We started to eat and talk again. Then out of nowhere some lady start busting out singing an old song.She sounded like a dying whale.AAAARRRGGGHHH she sung.

I was cracking up.So was everybody else. I thought she was horrible everyone else gave her an applause. The kids ran from her and started to play again. Someone ended up throwing(food not digested). Then as soon as i thought it was over they started playing music.

<span style="color: #188ef7; font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">They started to bring out the delicious desserts. The brownies, cookies, cake, and more. My sister was to busy to see the scrumcious sweets because she was,bickering back and forth with a kid saying" SSSSHHHUUUTTT UUUPPP" annoyed, and the kid replying, "MAKE MEEEEE". I went and grabbed a couple of brownies and cookies. I went and sat back down and ate them. Me and my friends and cousins started to play around with water guns.

<span style="color: #188ef7; font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">I had one huge water gun and one small. I hid behind the tree and squirted a couple of people.I ran from alot of small people too. One small boy was bragging saying he was faster than everyone there. I walked up to him and a crowd grew. I said' your not faster than me punk". Then the crowd say OOOOOOHHHHHH. We both lined our feet up at the line.....

<span style="color: #188ef7; font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">He ran off before me and i jogged very slowy and quickly started to walk to the finish line.I won i was so pumped up and he was shocked for what i dont know im about 2 times his size. But anyway we all stared to relay race the boys vs girls. One boy fell on his face, got up and started to laugh. I ran quickly to the car to get my bike so i could ride when i heard screaming like on a horror movie. The same little boy that lost a race to me was shooting people with a plastic bee bee gun.

<span style="color: #188ef7; font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">Some one went and told his mother. I got my bike and so did my sister. we rode aroundthe kids scarin them it was funny. My mom called us to the car and gave us fireworks to lite. We lit them they popped excitingly in the air and afterwards everyone got there food to take home and we all left. That day i learned that is the best day of summer.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 160%;">Paris- You did a really good job writing this narrative. Again, If you are willing to work hard i would suggest that you be in scholars next year. Your writing and reading abilities are at that level. This paper demonstrates a strong grammatical understanding and good use of punctuation. Good dialogue. You could elaborate on the race a little and make this into a solid conflict. But this is a very good narrative.

<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Assignment 9:An influential person is <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Bruno Mars <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">. His B-day is October 8, 1985. His birth name is Peter Gene Hernendez. His hometown is Honolulu, Hawaii. The name Bruno came from baby times.

<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">At age 4 he joined a family musical. His mother was a talented singer and dancer. As to his father he was a percussionist. In HS (high school) he formed a band. The band he formed was called the School Boys.

<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">After graduating high school peter aka Bruno moved to LA. He was very young when he signed. Bruno is now a songwriter,singer,and a song <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">Bruno says any other place he likes to be in than being in the studio is the stage. He has he influenced music alot. He shows lots of kids that you can grow up in a big family, have talent, and fufill your dream. He inspires millions of people. His newest song released is Liqour Store Blues. He sing a duet with Damian Marley. <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">He also has a song called"DOO WOPS&HOOLIGANS" His career started in 2006. In 2009 Bruno Mars became a geust apperanceon the Album, FAR EAST MOVEMENT. <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Good work here Paris. A few questions come to mind when I read this: How was he discovered? How popular is he and how has his music sold? Do a lot of people listen to him? Who does he say his favorite musicians are? Go ahead a look for some of this stuff to make your paper stronger. <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Paris- I like your start here. I would add some more research and work on how he has <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">influenced music. He brings a lot of talents to the table. What does that do for music? Keep working on this <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">and do as much reading as you can on Bruno mars. I think this will give depth to your writing. <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">Assignment 10: <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">My name is PARI$. I live in an amazing technology house. My bathroom is like 5x biqqer than the regular bathroom. <span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">

<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;">Assignment 11: Technology progress is good in a couple of ways. One it helps things go faster. For example on the computer on FaceBook messages send faster statuses post faster. Games load faster apps pop up quicker. Or if someone was to dowload something on there computer. With our technology we have now it will download in 13.4 seconds. Also cellphones can call faster, text quicker. Speed is like 4x's faster then it was.

<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%; text-align: center;"><span style="color: #ff0063; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Assignment 12: <span style="color: #ff0063; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">May 13 Friday: I thought mr.boll was a jerk when he made me take my glasses of in english. I think he probably did that because i was rippin". Chaniya got p ﻿issed off and start talking to her spirits.

<span style="color: #ff0063; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%; line-height: 0px; overflow: hidden;">May 16 Monday:2 period in Mrs.Dranes room, We are taking a final today. Then a movie its kinda good. The bell just rung( BZZZZ

<span style="color: #ff0063; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%; line-height: 0px; overflow: hidden;">BZBZBZ) Ms. K says were cleaning all week i say were not.